The Name
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5
10
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She sighed
what's your name
my
my my game ... uh ... er ... what did you say my name ... yes what's your name I have no name I lost my name when the music ceased to echo. |
Source
Khasu, Kona. “The Name.” The Seeds of Time: A Collection of Poems. Mimeographed typescript. Monrovia, 1971. 9.
Editorial Changes
| Line | Typescript | Changed to |
| 5 | my game... | my game ... |
| 6 | uh..er... | uh ... er ... |